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Summary: A collection of haiku on one loud fox and one quiet dove.
Disclaimer: Credits to Masashi Kishimoto for his characters and story.
Naruto Uzumaki
Tunnel Vision
Black hair Pink hair
Hokage Ramen
He sees her not
Chunnin Arena
Red drops
One, two, three
To the standing white he pounced
Pain
Anger
Six wave in air
Fire rages, love breathes shallow
Aftermath
Love in
Shy, shy lavender
Blue blushes in white
Knowledge
Blushes
Stutters
Ignorant no more is the fox
Deception
Lies
Bright, bright pink
Blue burns in green
Hinata Hyuuga
Speechless
Silence so quiet
The gentle love
Grows over the fox
Runaway
Blushes
Stutters while
Footsteps patter in lavender
Chunnin Exam
"Confidence!"
Confident she looks
Into like white eyes
Oblivion
Orange
Bright orange flashes—
Chunnin arena fades
Confession
"I love you."
Confession, Pain strucks
She falls as he froze
Done
Sees fox
Sees pink and green
Sees blue, before she breaks
Naruto Uzumaki and Hinata Hyuuga
Blushes
Awaits, while blue wavers
The fox and the dove.
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I spotted some grammar issues in one of your haiku, "Confession." I hope you don't mind a little correction:
Confession, Pain strikes
She fell as he froze